Part 2 of Vaitlin's story

Wandering further away from the cliff Vaitlin felt his own feelings were coming back in some way. The dark spots in his mind seemed to decline with every step he took. No longer was he controlled by this depressed thoughts that brought him up here. Still the wind was pulling at his clothes, as if to make one last effort to blow him to the edge of the cliff again. Headshaking, while taking step after step through the long green waving grass, Vaitlin pushed away a disturbing thought. ‘No, it isn’t possible. Why should the forces of nature even think of me? Am I that selfish, that I think nature is making me to leave this world.’ A deep and rumbling laugh came out of his mouth, laughing away the insanity of his own words. Turning around for one last time, to never think of this moment again Vaitlin fell to his knees. ‘No! No it’s not possible!’. But still the image of this lady dressed in white burned on his mind. ‘It’s only this cliff which depresses me, it can’t be Deluriel. She would never jump’.

The story of Vaitlin begins

Well our online story has started....my beginning: The Cliff



Looking over the enormous sea with waves that would swallow everyting, Vaitlin stood on the highest cliff looking at the far horizon. Seagulls flying close towards him, as if they wanted him to join them and spread his wings. ‘Choose the open air, an endlessly flight through these cloudened skies’. Slowly he reached for his face to discover a single tear, a pearl shining in the appearing sun. Was it a tear of sadness or a tear of happiness, Vaitlin wasn’t sure. Why did he came all the way up here, to this lonely cliff with nothing more than some lousy fighting birds. The wind was pushing and pulling so hard he had to be careful he wouldn’t fall into the deep and endless sea. Or did he come here to jump and end his life without leaving a single trace? Vaitlin shook his head and whispered to the dark sea ‘why did I came here, what happened, what will happen’. At that moment he screamed like the world was coming to his end. Something inside woke him up from some kind of trance and pulled him away from the cliff. Slowly walking away from this place where everything could have ended, everything begins while Vaitlin took his first step towards his new journey.

Online story at fansquare

Together with some friends we created an online forum, fansquare. We are looking for more writers! At least once in three days every person has to post a part (10-50 sentences) of the story, you have to create your own story. Every writer creates his/her own character and let it start somewhere in this fantasy world. For example in the woods, cliff or dungeon.

In the beginning it will be very new and wil lbe under construction for a while. We don't know yet what the entire world will look like, what are the distances between places and when you travel you experience travelling time. But don't let it hold you back... first start with the story of your character. After a while your character can meet one of he other authors, so you can travel together and write for that other person too..

Well do you like to write and wanna experience some magical adventures...join us now and register at: http://z6.invisionfree.com/FanSquare/index.php (you have to copy this link and paste it in a new window due to the fact that this link doesn't work on my blog)